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Second application by Makiavel.

Post by Maki »

Makiavel aka Wassup wrote:You aren't obliged to look at the spoiler, though it's a plus and took me some time to write.
Spoiler!
Biography

The 7th April 2011,

I found a friend playing Jailbreak, reminding my old days on ZoW, I decided to join him.

The first day was quite a mess, remembering the rules, learning the new ones, being
somewhere I didn’t know anyone. I was being aggressive, harassing so much, almost
insulting.

Three weeks later :

I finally know most of the rules, I made some friends but I’m still whining and harassing, I try
To be more cooperative and to whine less, though it doesn’t really work…
Asking why I got killed when I didn’t know, using caps when I get freekilled, I’m getting
angry easily…

The 10th May 2011 :

It is the start of my forum account, and with it comes my first report. For my futures ambitions , i start trying to help people with rules, tell them when they freekilled or not, although my knowledge isn't infinite, i try to do my best. It isn't that easy, because with it comes its lot of flaming, of telling me "Who are you to tell me that", and even an "Everyone hates you". Which ends up in these guys not listening and getting banned for breaking the rules later on.

The 7th June 2011 at night :

My determination to write an application is high, although unsure of the result, I still can't bring me to step down. Although it won't be easy, I got a tough will. So the same night, I think about creating my story on neonDragon, thinking that this idea would be original, as I never saw something like that before. I never did it in English, but got some knowledge in it. I start my report the Eighth June 2011, I was needing to go out, but took a notebook with me. I ended up doing a draft.
Coming back at night, I decide to type it on the computer. Adding colors, making the important parts in text in italic, and the rest. I decide to think about what i should do for my application the Ninth June 2011.
I currently have reported seventh people, which are all successful (belton got perm banned after i added additional proofs as he was on strike 2)

The same day, my application gets declined, I felt a little depressed, and wanted to quit for an instant. Instead of that, I though of trying even more for my next application. I don't know when I will apply, but I got my time. Though I decided to take a break.

The 14th June 2011.

I start back to play on nD, though less than before, taking my time to start back. I still help people, try to report less and instead tell the people online how to play, teach them, tell them where to find the rules.

Two weeks later :

I started commanding, and with it comes my first freekills, I though I knew most of the rules, but I was wrong, the first trolling due to my voice starts, Although I try to stay calm, some comments like telling me I'm handicapped makes me angry, I leave sometimes in the middle of my commanding, and decided later on to start learning how to command with less peoples and during the night, as all those trollers won't be connected to disturb me in the middle. It goes fine and I continue commanding during the day. I'm shy and bad at commanding, but this doesn't make me stop.

The 07 July (Or 08 ?)


I bought VIP and I'm not scared of using it as long as it benefits to the server (Although i do use Noclip/Quad damage(On Zombie),Slap and glow). I do votemaps when the map bug or is overplayed, or when some players ask me to do it, though I'm not someone perfect and do sometimes errors.

The 22th July,
I am going in vacation (that is to explain the reason there is a break in my playtime)

The 04 August,

I just came back, and decided to try my chance in applying. .

What is your Steam ID ? My Steam ID is STEAM_0:1:9068738

What is your name In Game ? Makiavel aka Wassup.

How old are you ? I am fourteen,I was born the 10 december 1996. It didn't change.

Are you a boy or a girl ? I am a boy

Do you have any experience as a admin or leading a server ?

No, none. I already bought admin on servers, but I don't personally count that as experience, I can learn pretty fast though. I bought VIP, and usually use it to votekick some freekillers or so, I used my voteban sometimes, I always get some proofs before using it, and use it especially when it's absolutely required in my opinion.

How much time per day do you approximately play on our servers ?

Since I have in the 540hours and I started the 7 April 2011, It is around 6hours, although I play more some days and less some others.
Though I was in vacation the others 15days, I didn't count them in, I know it lowers my chances but well.
Approximately, when did you start playing on our servers?

I joined the 7 April 2011

Do you have a working microphone ? Yes I do, Although I command mostly during the night or early mornings, when there is no commander, or when some people ask me to go command, I prefer playing as a terrorist, but playing as a CT and commanding isn't really a problem.I can handle the trollers, but i'm not really kind with them. The nights, I'm trying to do something fun, though when the terrorist rebel and I'm alone, it's not really possible.

Do you have any Strike for the moment ?

No, I never heard of me having a strike, I already got banned, not that many bans though, the only one I remember of is Uhu banning me for calling him a *******. I think I learned from this ban though.

What do you study ?

At school, I'm in the option Sciences-Language, aiming for Sciences-Math, 8 hours of Math, 6 of Sciences, as i want to do something based on maths later on. I still don't know what though. This didn't change since my last application, as option are the same for the degree ( 1 and 2, 3 and 4 , 5 and 6) What i want to do later on didn't change either.

What are your dreams ?

Kinda normal ones, Having a wife, Living a good and peaceful life, having children, having a work, having a home and maybe win at EuroMillions :D

What are your hobbies ?
What everyone that is 14 do, play soccer with my friends, talking with them, going out with them, I also like playing.(though I'm not sure everyone does that :p)


What are your motivations to enter the neonDragon Jailbreak team ?

I won't give the same motivations as last time, as for me, doing a new application means changing it, to show that I got motivation to join the team.
I am usually connected the night, early in the morning, and during the day also. Sometimes there is no member . I would like to help during these moments , let's just say I like moderating. I would of course follow the process and the rules I need to follow as a member. But I don't know everything. Still I'm willing to learn, to help this community I play on. I never have been that addicted on a community for a while now.
I am thinking I found my place.


Something to add ? No nothing, Except that I live in Belgium and I am from Morocco.

PS : Sorry if it's a little too long.
Last edited by Maki on Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:41 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Second application by Makiavel.

Post by Watch Your Head »

Very nice application :clap:


Pro's

- know the rules
- have a mic
- reports from time to time!
- helps people out

Con's

- there is some minor cons there is no need to mention them, easy to fix!

anyways Good luck whit ur app and i wish u the best!

YES! from me.
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Post by Sarah »

A really nice app, you took the time really write a good one that something new :)

I do not see you as a member material tbh, Im sorry for that but my vote is no and I wish you good luck :)
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Pros

- Kind
- Nice
- Super active
- Has many hours, been around for long
- (Dno if this is a pro) He donated to the community which shows he genuinely cares!
- Application seems very decent.


Cons

- Could command a bit more and have more confidence in his commanding, ignore people that complains about smaller details in his commanding.
- Age

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I won't/can't judge your rule knowledge and forum activity, since I'm actually nore sure about that :P Your rule knowledge seems fine, I don't see you post too much but you seem to leave a post or a thread if necessary :)

Conclusion:
I think this guy would be a great addition to the team! :) He's always kind and nice infront of me, and he tries to justify unfair situations, imo he's just a fair and nice guy! Yes from me!

Goodluck

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Re: Second application by Makiavel.

Post by Norrby »

I totally agree on what Shadi wrote execpt the Age on the Cons
(Epic application btw)
nD* Runner VIP | norrby on 23th January 2011 :)
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Re: Second application by Makiavel.

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Thanks for the kind replies everyone, Can you tell me some cons Sarah so I improve them please ?
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I can see you put alot of effort into your application and that shows you're dedicated but you might have overdone it a little. Quantity doesn't equal to quality and sometimes it's nice to read a decent-lenghty application. And you could have put all of the non-cs related topics in the same category instead.

Anyway, I should also comment about your possibility to become a member. I've seen you in the server many times and you're quite a regular nowdays. But to be honest I don't see you standing out so much, don't notice you so often you just play your game and that's basically it. I don't remember seeing you helping out people so much with learning JB for new players or just help out with some rules. Therefor I'm not sure if you're suitable as a member. But I still see that you could possibly be a member but I'm not convinced so I will leave my vote blank.

Good luck with your application!
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Re: Second application by Makiavel.

Post by ShAl' D. »

Hello :)

I'm not a jailbreak specialist but I can say some little general things.

Pro's :
- I was just playing with you this morning on CS5 when undercover and I saw that you tried several times to explain the rules to the others (especially the stuff about aircamping on the glass vent, that has just been discussed in the forums). And you did it very well
- You seem like a calm and nice person
- You obviously know the rules of the zombie modes (can be usefull, as if you happen to become a member your powers will be available on all the servers)
- You're aware of what happens on the forums and by so you're quite active (prooven by my first point)
- You did successful reports
- You bought VIP
- Good application, you put efforts in it (by changing it from your first one for example)


Conclusion :
I can't say much more about you as you're applying for jb and as I never played jb, and furthermore I don't know you more than that. According to this, I'll not provide any vote. But I wanted to post something when I saw you playing this morning. Despite your age, I'm pretty convinced that you're mature enough to handle the job. Good luck.
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Re: Second application by Makiavel.

Post by Dangan »

Hello Makiavel :)

I can't post proper answer at the moment, because we have played at diffrent times so I haven't really seen you in action for a while, so I will edit this post later and post my thoughts.

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Re: Second application by Makiavel.

Post by eDi =) »

Hi!

Pro's :

- Have seen you much in-game.
- Your helping other players/your team a lot.
- Yes you know the rules.
- Nice application :clap: .

Con's :

- Age.
- Your harrassing a little sometimes.

conclusion : Well I like you. But your little young. And You can be little annoying sometimes. BLANK. Good luck :).
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Spato wrote:I can see you put alot of effort into your application and that shows you're dedicated but you might have overdone it a little. Quantity doesn't equal to quality and sometimes it's nice to read a decent-lenghty application. And you could have put all of the non-cs related topics in the same category instead.

Anyway, I should also comment about your possibility to become a member. I've seen you in the server many times and you're quite a regular nowdays. But to be honest I don't see you standing out so much, don't notice you so often you just play your game and that's basically it. I don't remember seeing you helping out people so much with learning JB for new players or just help out with some rules. Therefor I'm not sure if you're suitable as a member. But I still see that you could possibly be a member but I'm not convinced so I will leave my vote blank.

Good luck with your application!
Reflects my opinion very well,

Good luck makia ;)
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Re: Second application by Makiavel.

Post by Maki »

Thanks for the replies :)
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Re: Second application by Makiavel.

Post by epic winning »

All Pro's and con's have been said.

Good luck Maki
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apapaoemama wrote:
Spato wrote:I can see you put alot of effort into your application and that shows you're dedicated but you might have overdone it a little. Quantity doesn't equal to quality and sometimes it's nice to read a decent-lenghty application. And you could have put all of the non-cs related topics in the same category instead.

Anyway, I should also comment about your possibility to become a member. I've seen you in the server many times and you're quite a regular nowdays. But to be honest I don't see you standing out so much, don't notice you so often you just play your game and that's basically it. I don't remember seeing you helping out people so much with learning JB for new players or just help out with some rules. Therefor I'm not sure if you're suitable as a member. But I still see that you could possibly be a member but I'm not convinced so I will leave my vote blank.

Good luck with your application!
Reflects my opinion very well,

Good luck makia ;)
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Post by Laprot the Freekiller »

Good Luck mate ;)
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